David's Persepolis Blog Week Three: Feedback

For feeback this week, I commented on the blogs of Rushil and Inder. For Rushil's post, I told him that he needs watch out for the spelling mistakes, sign his posts, and say which section he is writing about. For Inder's post I said that did a good job of relating a part of Persepolis with 1984, but I also told him that he needs to expand on the idea. He also needs to sign his blog posts.